T3+writing

14/9/11

W.A.L.T: Follow the features of a recount

S.C. - Recall past events - Use personal pronouns - Has an introduction - Has a conclusion - Is writen in past tence - Has sequenced in order - Tells us what,why,when,where - introduction - Personal comments

Deffintion of a recout

Retells past events in the order that they occurred

Conjuntcions to connect time (firstley,shortley next) Adjectives - Huge Nouns - Climbing wall Verb - Run

Day 1 - Tramp and cook own meals,Set up rooms,Night walk,spotlight Day 2 - Swimming,loop track, (bush walk) Fire lighting Abl Art Buma trail, Spotlight Day 3 - Activity day 1, Spotlight, possum hunting, Swimming, Bomb fire Day 4 - Activity day 2, Spotlight, Camp consert Day 5 - Clean up, eel, Clash of the camp, scavenger hunt, HOME!



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29/8/11

WALT:You can identify some of the dangers of digital social networking S.C. You can name for or more isus regarding safty with digital socal networking You ca discus and share with your group / class

25/8/11

The hippo

With chubby legs like an elephant.He likes to make noises like boom crash and thud.His mums name is Chubby Catlin.The wobbly chair that he was sitting on instantly got up and walked out the door and he was off balance and he fell down the stairs fell on his bum and head and he made him mentally retared .Chubby Catlin said that he should have moved out earlier so that he didn’t die and she cared on with her house work

The end //You haven't described the hippo well at all. Little effort looks like it has been put into this work. This makes me very dissapointed.// //Next learning steps:// //read the task. Describe the hippo!// //have a point. What is the point to this story.// //Apply effort. You can produce good work if you try harder.// //Miss Connor.//

22/8/11

My dream house

The house that I am currently living in is big but not big but not big enough and the house is $90,000,000. The house will have 5 stories and the story at the bottom is under ground and has all my secret weapons in it as in the shotgun,sniper rifle,rocket launcher,sub machine gun. The ravenous dogs that I will have names are bob,bones,scar face and man eater they will be the best guard dogs in the area. It also has a foosball table,table tennis table,tennis court, and a big big bathroom. The house has every thing I like the house because it has every thing that a boy would like and want.